Friday, October 19, 2018

ERROR DETECTOR_ WR_01_ Marta is the perfect au-pair for Angela









 WR_01_ Introduce an au-pair. 
Answer's to Angela's message (Efile, page 113)



Dear Angela,


I am writting you to introduce Marta.

Marta is  very interested person. I know her really good. She is like you, so... I think I met Marta perfectly.


She want to knows another countries, that let her to be a new experiences and learn her english. She likes people and her sister is younger than she. She is in the mid-twenties, althoug her aperiance is more younger.


We met when she comes to my granny's house three years ago, for to looks after my little cousins, the childrens  had 8 and 5  years. I hope our friendship will lasted for much years to come.


What can I say about her? Marta is a good-
tempered, hardworker, responsable. Also, she is a good cooking!


Some other things about Marta, she used to win the basketball competitions. Now she loves both do exercise and going to the theatre.


Love, xxo


me  

PS: my brother Isaac passed her medicine entry exam!







 

TASK 2.  ERROR DETECTOR

WR_01_ Introduce an au-pair.  
Correct your answer to Angela's message.


Dear Angela,

I am writting you to introduce Marta.

Marta is  ___ very interested person. I know her really good. She is like you, so... I think I met Marta perfectly.

She want  to knows  another countries, that let her to be a new experiences and learn her english. She likes people and her  sister is younger than she. She is in the mid-twenties, althoug her aperiance is more younger.

We met when she comes to my granny's house three years ago, for to looks after my little cousins, the childrens  had 8 and 5  years. I hope our friendship will lasted for much years to come.

What can I say about her? Marta is a good-tempered, hardworker, responsable. Also, she is a good cooking!

Some other things about Marta, she used to wins the basketball competitions. Now she loves both do exercise and going to the theatre.

Love,

xxxooo / xoxoxo

me  

PS: my brother Isaac passed her medicine entry exam!

WR_ERROR DETECTOR -au-pair. EXPLAIN them



ERROR DETECTOR_______

________EXPLAIN all of them (classify the different mistakes)

  • spelling
  • syntax
  • wrong verb form
  • wrong tense
  • extra word
  • missing word
  • wrong concordance (sing-plural)

  • others....



______KEY_____________


Dear Angela,

BIT 1_

I am writing you to introduce Marta.

Marta is  a very interesting person. I know her really  well.

She is like you, so... I think  YOU will get on well with Marta / you will find her almost perfect/very entusiastic....


BIT 2_

She wants  to know  other countries,

that let her ___  have__ a new experience____ and learn ____  English.

She likes people and her  sister is younger than her.

She is in the mid-twenties, although her appearance is much younger.


BIT 3_

We met when she came__ to my granny's house three years ago, ____ to look__ after my little cousins, the children__  were 8 and 5  years. I hope our friendship will last for many years to come.


BIT 4_

What can I say about her? Marta is a good-tempered, hardworking AND responsible. Also, she is a good cook__!


BIT 5_

Some other things about Marta, she used to wins the basketball competitions. Now she loves both do exercise and going to the theatre.


Love,

xxxooo / xoxoxo


me  


PS: my brother Isaac passed his medicine entry exam!

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