Wednesday, June 3, 2020

Pondering about myself


my pronunciation work 
Reaction to the model text - here



        Pondering about myself: reflective journals   - Sebastià B

Robert Collier said once “Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out”. Learning anything, needs effort, persistence and big portions of self-demanding grit. Without any of these traits never we’ll achieve our goal.
The more time you practise, the better you will do. It’s a done deal. In my case I’m used to listening original videos, radio, (BBC radio 4 , for instance is a good one ), watching tv serials, films or news ( BBC, CNN…) or reading online newspapers (Guardian, ABC, BBC  news..) that have thousands of videos in, getting used to all the range of accents.
The second part is the oral one. There are several ways to practice, but basically can be summed up by just one word:  rehearsal (either imitate or repeat).
It’s not such a good idea to practice talking with people at your own level of knowledge, because there’s no place for the improvement, unless there was an external person that were correcting constantly, hard to be a common option.
Learning by hard some lyrics, or repeating any dialogue of any video you are interested in. Mind you, does not a baby child learn to talk any language? In fact, that’s back to real, difficult as it may be (Chinese or Japanese for instance).
In summary, it reminds me of the old lore: work, work and a little bit more of work.





My  fav and fab pronunciation tools.  - Eva garrido


I have always considered pronunciation to be the most important thing when studying a foreign language.  Admittedly, not only pronunciation but also intonation.

To have a good pronunciation in English, listening Tasks are the most important tool within my reach. The favourite supports I use the most are the fabulous TED: Ideas worth spreading.
I remember once I heard about how to talk like a native speaker. The speaker talked about the process of learning a foreign language and the different levels of fluency. In a nutshell, what are the requirement to sound like a native speaker?
The requirement is work on eliminating your accent at most if you are gifted (not my sort) or at least minimizing it. The best exercise I found to improve my pronunciation is repeating sentences I heard in a movie with the same pronunciation and intonation that native speaker, rehearsals once and again, recording myself until the sentence I am saying sounds like the native speaker actor.

But obviously, to learn how to pronounce well, you first have to learn to listen to be able to distinguish sounds that seem the same (ex. Lack / Luck). Again movies are a good tool for this, although I go for songs more than I lean on movies.

When I detect a word that I have been mispronouncing for a long time, I immediately correct that error. Indeed, the longer I continue to mispronounce that word the more difficult it will be to correct that vice. Again poor rehearsals follow better repeating out loud as the key to remembering and memorizing the correct pronunciation of that word. An example among many, anxiety. I pronounced it as it was written when de pronunciation is   /aŋˈzʌɪəti/.


You don't start talking with the rhythm and intonation of a native overnight, but luckily I've always had a good ear for music and pronunciation (also in French, because at school my generation studied French, never English). For some reason, pronunciation, intonation and emphasis are not my weaknesses, which does not mean that I do not have to work on them because there is always room for improvement. Anyway, as the Chinese proverb goes: practice makes you perfect; so old virtues such as perseverance and consistency is what has helped me keep on this journey of discovery:  intonation improvement is paramount.




Reflecting on techniques to improve pronunciation -  Laia S.

This paper aims to assess personal learning and improvement in English pronunciation. Analysing my own speech and fine-tuning the ear has been the best attitudes for correcting, perfecting and discovering a pile of personal mistakes related to intonation and pronunciation. It must be acknowledged, though, that there is always something to learn and improve, even though we personally believe we are already doing well.

First of all, to delve into the learning of English pronunciation, I started listening songs, something that was perfect for me to listen to, practice and enjoy at the same time. Katy Perry, OneRepublic, Ellie Goulding, SIA, have been the favourite singers and groups to be able to understand the lyrics well and enjoy their music. Now then, the songs have been always subtitled to follow the lyrics, learn it and, later, be able to sing it with Karaoke.

In the second place, working on dialogues on diverse series like Modern Family, Once upon a time, The Vampire Diaries, Friends – has been a hard task for me, but I felt it quite interesting to practice English, pronunciation, expressions, intonations, and so on. Loving series is what has helped me to see them in their original version, so I had a delightful time with a great resource. 
The operation I followed has been the same as with the songs, listening to the dialogs and reading the subtitles. In addition, I have also chosen some chapters that I liked the most, I have reproduced them and, in the meantime, I have been writing the dialogue.

However, seen from the negative side, it must be said that sometimes it is difficult to have time to do it, having a good concentration, a good predisposition, etc. And, fortunately, this has been possible for the quarantine but during the daily routine it is much more strenuous. Moreover, practicing the parallel reading technique has also been great for me to immediately realize which the most arduous words to pronounce properly were and which were more accurate. Hearing the two voices at the same time (own and the one in the video) is highly recommended because it is greatly evident. Nevertheless, this task is not much fun, because interacting with yourself is quite boring.

Another way to work on it was to record my voice reading 20 seconds of a snippet of dialogue, and repeat it 3 different days later, to analyse changes. And I have really noticed some small improvement. Awesome! Listening has also been a good resource, and I have honestly noticed it a lot both for fine-tuning my ear and for acquiring pronunciation. Also, taking advantage of the lockdown, I have been able to do it more often than before, and it has helped me a lot, especially in improving my listening attitude. I learnt to avoid the wish of understanding all the words.

Finally, I must say that more than the pronunciations, I have found a great change in intonation. Culture and mother tongue, I guess, have a big influence on the way I speak, and that one is different from English. Well, despite that fact, I will keep working on it because I have realized my improvement and my evolution.

And eventually, if I had to recommend a starting point for all we are learning English, I would say start with what makes you happy and reminds you good times, such as listening music, watching childhood movies, reading comics or novels. It is a constructive task that encourages you to move forward and take the initiative to continue building yourself.





Learning, Learning, Learning…   - Albert B.

After having received your last asignment proposal,  I  admit  I  felt.... Touché.  and paraphrasing the famous Emile Zola’s headline: “J’accuse”, I could subscribe it with a little change:  “Je m’accuse”. Of what? Of having a bad pronunciation. What must be done to solve it?

First of all, I recognised it, I have to read out loud;  from the best bits, recording my work, listening to it and  keep on repeating.

Secondly, to check online the pronunciation of the words, even if i guessed it was known, mostly the ones I do not know the correct pronunciation or I make mistakes, recording them, listening, checking the results and some days after, do again and repeating again and again (these words are going to be kind of my particular mantra).

Thirdly, to choose some episodes from TV series, watching first in English version with English subtitles, watching after without them, doing a self-dictation from them and finally, trying to reproduce the dialogues of little bits of several episodes and rehearse them, in a funny, non shy way.

Fourthly and being lucky, finding a partner, with a better English knowledge than mine, to practise the conversation, hoping that this partner is willing to correct me. At the beginning, I would prefer an English partner to start with teh more classic RP. As time goes by, and knowledge becomes established, I would try to expand relationships and learn about the wide variety of regional and Commonwealth accents.

Finally and to resume, almost everything revolves around the mantra stated at the title ... with the sound track of an all-time clàssic Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps by Doris Day:  “If I can't make my mind up I'll never get started”. However, I am not young and my question is: will I have enough time to do it?


PS: Until now, I have left aside the songs. Owing to not-in-my-prime hearing talents, I believe that I will give up soon; taking into account that even sometimes I am even not able to understand correctly some fragments sung in Spanish or Catalan. I suppose that applying the mantra I could have a slight hope of success, but all at due time.








Sunday, May 31, 2020

Esta tarde vi llover -- amb ARMANDO -COVER VERSIONS



TASK 1.

  Find 12  differences between the spoken phrases of this classic




 my all-time favourite A. Manzanero,  Tarde ví llover

        

Yesterday I heard the rain 

Yesterday I heard the rain whispering your name
Asking where you'd gone
It fell softly from the clouds on the silent crowds
As I wandered on

Out of doorways black umbrellas came to pursue me
Faceless people as they passed were looking through me
No one knew me
Yesterday I shut my eyes, face up to the skies
Drinking in the rain
But your image still was there, floating in the air
Brighter than a flame
Yesterday I saw a city
Full of shadows without pity
And I heard the steady rain
Whispering your name x2

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Thursday, January 9, 2020

Fluency_04_ 2 PIECES DialogueS -FOOD



    4.3.   A HAM SANDWICH

A: What is there to eat?
B: I don't know. Look in the fridge.
A: I think I'll make a sandwich.
B: What kind?
A: A ham sandwich.
B: The bread is in the cabinet.
A: Where's the mustard?
B: It's in the fridge, I think.
A: Oh, yes, here it is. Do you want a sandwich?
B: Yes, that sounds nice.
A: How about some potato chips?
B: Yes. And a pickle, if we have any.

4.3. bis_ PLEASE,   REPEAT......

A: What is there to eat?
B: I don't know.   ..................

A: I think I'll make a sandwich.
B: What ..................?

A: A ham sandwich.
B: The bread ...................

A: Where's the mustard?
B: It's in the ..................

A: Oh, yes, here it is. Do you want a sandwich?
B: Yes, that ...................

A: How about some potato chips?
B: Yes. And a pickle, if .................. 






           4.4.   A BAD DIET



A: Mom, I'm hungry.
B: Look in the fridge.
A: I'm looking. There's nothing to eat.
B: Are you sure?
A: It's almost empty.
B: I went to the market yesterday.
A: I don't see anything.
B: I bought lots of oranges and apples.
A: I don't want fruit. I want something tasty.
B: Eat the fruit. It's good for you.
A: Next time you go to the market, let me go with you.
B: No, thank you. All you want to eat are hot dogs and candy bars.


 4.4. bis_ PLEASE,   REPEAT......

         A: Mom, I'm hungry
B: Look in the fridge. 
A: I'm looking. There's ........................ 
B: Are you sure? 
A: It's almost  ......................... 
B: I went to the market yesterday. 
A: I don't  ........................ anything. 
B: I bought lots of oranges and apples. 
A: I don't want  ......................... I want something  ......................... 
B: Eat the fruit. It's good  ......................... 
A: Next time you go to  ........................, let me  ......................... 
B: No, thank you. All you want to eat are hot dogs and candy bars






















Fluency_04_ PASADENA AND BOY



Fluency_04_  2 PIECES


 Dialogue AND NARRATIVE

      4.1. I live in Pasadena

https://www.eslfast.com/easydialogs/ec/dailylife001.htm

A: Where do you live?
B: I live in Pasadena. 
A: Where is Pasadena?
B: It's in California. 
A: Is it in northern California?
B: No. It's in southern California. 
A: Is Pasadena a big city?
B: It's pretty big. 
A: How big is "pretty big"?
B: It has about 140,000 people. 
A: How big is Los Angeles?
B: It has about 3 million people.



4.2. A good boy


  • Billy always listens to his mother. He always does what she says. If his mother says, "Brush your teeth," Billy brushes his teeth. If his mother says, "Go to bed," Billy goes to bed. Billy is a very good boy. 
  • A good boy listens to his mother. His mother doesn't have to ask him again. She asks him to do something one time, and she doesn't ask again. Billy is a good boy. He does what his mother asks the first time. She doesn't have to ask again. She tells Billy, "You are my best child." Of course Billy is her best child. Billy is her only child.




Sunday, December 15, 2019

WR DECEMBER

 Composition. DAHL's NEGATIVE REVIEW 


 (not a mild one!)
 a 320-word text on R Dahl's novel

DEADLINE: 17th December




All that glitters is not Dahl by Aitor G J


Roald Dahl is famous for having written books such as Matilda, which is his most known novel. All his literature works are mainly aimed to children. Despite that fact, some weeks ago I came across a different book of his: Ten Short Stories. Trust me when I say we should all think of calling it Ten Harsh Stories.
Predictably, you may think I didn’t like it. However these are words which are still not strong enough to define the feeling I had after having read them. Admittedly, the author had the intention to write stories with a wry sense of humour and eccentric characters. As a matter of fact, though, the stories were completely nonsense and unrealistic and the characters had a rather deceiving attitude towards the situations they had to encounter.
What might also be essential to dissuade an innocent reader who has the purpose of buying this book is, to start with, the irony which the author fails to use. Of course, literary resources like the one provided are probably too complex to use for the writer. Therefore, not much quality should be expected on this. However, Dahl’s irony is the worse of its kind. Apart from being quite silly, it is very difficult to understand due to its complexity. In my opinion, the author should have focused more on getting his message across in rough and ready language rather than writing so many unnecessary lines which fail to be comic.
In conclusion, I strongly advise any reader to reject the tempting idea of spending some time reading it since it would be wasting your time which you’d better invest on reading the yellow pages.
 Aitor GJ 


The Hidden Dark Soul by Haritha Chalil Savithri



Roald Dahl (1916-1990), is the author of many children's books and fiction for adults. They are still famous, relevant and entertaining readers globally. Dahl's short stories are well known for surprise twists, black humour and readability.
 Because of the sophisticated language and the nature of conventionally satisfying morality in his tales, Dahl is not much attacked for the unseen negativity. There is an invisible stream of naive perversions of humanity in Roald Dahl´s stores for adults. Normally Dahl´s stories end with disturbing conclusions, fraudulent schemes or sudden revelations that can destroy reader’s assumptions. Even though his stories are served with the support of delicious narrative, the innate darkness leaves a bitter taste in reader´s mind. Presence of a hidden streak of cynicism and cruelty seems to be instinctive than a deliberate attempt. Dahl´s negative fantasies are sugar coated with charm of his narrative in his short stories for adults.
 With a positive intention to create the right ambience to unfold the story, Dahl illustrates a detailed account of the landscape, life, locality and background. To an extend this can amuse the conventional readers but does not suite the present-day demands for adventurous experiments in narrative techniques. Normally Dahl develops the plot in a tiring leisurely manner. His stories start in slow pace, gradually develops tension and ends with a sudden twist. Readers who are familiar with this monotonous format appreciated them once, but the new generation of readers who are familiar with different styles may prefer unidentical structures.
 To make the story more appealing, Dahl makes the conversations unnecessarily long and detailed. By developing the story through detailed conversations, Dahl intents to enlighten the readers with more information. But avoidable descriptions and conversations can cause boredom and destroy the interest of reader.
 As a writer who deals with both adults´ and children´s literature, Dahl sometimes forgets the border between the two. By concentrating in minute details, he satisfies his little fans and will do forever. But influence of children´s literature often appears unintentionally in his stories for adults. It becomes difficult to differentiate between Dahl´s children´s literature and fiction for adults. His adult stories also are educational in nature and tend to have a moral lesson as if it is written for children.
 Cynicism and contempt for the entire world are some pessimistic elements hidden underneath the polished rendering of Dahl´s well known stories. Dahl develops kind of mistrust in the virtues of the world and denies the chance to expect positive possibilities. As an influential writer he missed his chance to develop hope and trust in the minds of his readers and make the world a better place.
 Dahl really didn´t know what it was like to trust in humanity, no matter how much did he write. The success of a short story writer depends largely on creating different structures in each story that he writes. All his short stories are celebrations of atrocities and follow the same pattern all the time. Roald Dahl does not rise to this challenge of diversity in his well-known short stories.




Dahl’s carefully well written, nonsense stories by Nuria P.


After having read the book “Ten short stories” written by Roahl Dahl I feel completely uncapable of making a raving review. In that case I must admit that the result of these words would have a different air of what many people could think about this recognized and well-known writer.
First of all, I would like to mention that I admired quite a lot this author. One of his most important best-sellers, without doubt, being “Matilda”, the worldwide acknowledged volume.  I, for one,  remember having fun when I read it.  So, when “Ten Short Stories” arrived at my hands, enjoyable memories of the Welsh author and “Matilda”’s  tome came back my mind, what made me eager to read it  quickly.
I confess that the first story I read, which was “The Butler", I found it strange, completely nonsense but I could understand that the  author had something special to tell us, so he got the message across clearly in a complex narration.  The second story, The Umbrella man" gave credit to my first, gloomy thoughts.  As a whole, now I consider the book full of strange stories with a surrealistic plot and full of eccentric characters.   All the stories share this Dahl’s irony that is very peculiar to him.
Taking into consideration that Roah Dahl is famous for his best book “Matilda”, I think that in general his books are mainly addressed to children.  As a matter of fact, though, these kind of careless stories may be very profitable for children. Apart from that, I consider quite useful the characters to someone interested in phycology.  For example, in “Mr Botibol” the main character is regarded as a person without self-confidence in himself. 
In fact, I cannot recommend this book although it is hard for me to remember the last time I discovered a novel as weird and freaky as this one.  Perhaps Dahl thought he had created an authentic book, but, from my point of view, it is far away from a masterpiece or even a humorous one.
In conclusion, to be fully honest with myself, I rarely did not enjoy his other work, but in this case it is a hard one to recommend it to anyone despite being written by a famous author.  Reading it, I have learnt that Roald Dahl is kind of master at overtwisting the stories and complicate them till turning them difficult to be accepted or  left the message understood. Obviously, although the stories are nonsense regarding the meaning and characters are impossible to fall in love with, they are carefully well written.



Ten short stories, ten long nightmares to read
By Joan Martinez Vila




 I regret every second that I have spent reading this book. I sincerely regret it. Roald Dahl is supposed to be a master in telling stories, but I have truly found this book very awful and unpleasant for reading. I cannot see the point in what Roald Dahl has done in this book. I do not find it very interesting and not at all catchy for the reader. There are few reasons for starting to read this book, and if you have already started to read it, there are even fewer reasons for continuing reading it. 
There are few stories worth reading, and those which are worth reading are simply and powerless to the reader. It is supposed to be in each story some moral or criticism towards some aspect in society, once I have read the entirely book all I can say is the only moral or criticism that one can take from the book, is towards its author.  In each story, Dahl tells very poorly what he wants to transmit, and almost never he achieves what he wants to tell. I really think that the author took a lot of time to explain his ideas and he got a very forced plot where almost never the reader seems to enjoy its reading.
What to say about the characters when I found them all terrible. There are none to be worth mentioning. In fact, I cannot remember the name of any of them. The stories are too short, or too boring for taking care about its characters. The only feeling that you can feel towards its characters is pity for being part of such a terrible literary story. If I could have felt some sympathy towards some character Dahl was successful in taking away that sympathy from me. None of their actions are worth commenting, their actions were forced to prove Dahl’s point but he did not achieve its purpose in any story. 
To sum up this absurdity, I must say that I believe in telling morals and in criticize certain aspects of society through telling short stories, but in this book, Dahl did not achieve any of his purposes when he wrote his stories. Overall, I do not know if fifty years ago some reader would enjoy while he reads the book, but I am sure of one thing, today, nobody can read this book and have a good time, or even find it pleasant to his mind. 



Ten short stories, ten dull, unworthy stories by Carlos O


Almost everybody has read one book written by the world known British novelist Roald Dahl. Personally, I have read several books written by him, such as Matilda, The Witches and George’s Marvelous Medicine, all of them in English, but I feel disappointed at this compilation of non-sense short stories.
As a start, I would say that I didn’t like the book because it was disconcerting and blurring to read although it is a rather short book. As far I am concerned this compilation seems to have been written  by an amateur in the art of writing, it doesn’t seem a book written by Dahl that is why I am disappointed, I have grown up reading his books and I feel that this book doesn’t reflect the author’s witty and sarcastic humor.
Secondly, from my point of view the stories were very plain and boring, many of them try to be funny but they fail badly trying to achieve some sense of humor, personally several times I didn’t catch the jokes at the ending of almost all of the stories. Even some stories have “black humor”, which I found a bit disrespectful and impolite considering the importance of the author. Moreover It seems as the author tried to make fun of English rural society stigmatizing them as rude, ultra-conservative and foolish. American characters are also portrayed in this book as rude, vain and disingenuous.
Thirdly, I think that the “lessons” that each story tries to teach us at the end of each chapter are no longer in vogue, many of the situations explained at the stories were partially outdated nowadays because the main plot of every story happened during the 50s (even before ... Elvis Presley).
Finally,  a warning to anybody who has thought of buying this book candidly, don’t do it unless you want to be disappointed with the author if you have grown up with his books as it was my case, you might found reading this volume boring, dumb ... and heavy as well.




Ten Pretty Boring Short Stories indeed by Efrem Batriu


Roald Dahl is said to be one of the greatest storytellers for children of the 20th century. He is well-known for writing acclaimed bestsellers like "James and the Giant Peach", "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" or "Matilda". However, during his career, Roald also wrote some short stories for the adult public. Some of them are compiled in "Ten Short Stories".
I've never read any book of Dahl but I knew he was considered a great storyteller so I had high expectations for "Then Short Stories" Unfortunately the book hadn't fulfilled any of them. In all the stories, the author depicts weird events were bizarre personages are always involved. Those situations are meant to put a smile on reader's face that the author want to froze by ending the stories in an unexpected macabre way. I love that kind of narrative trick, but to work appropriately the author must be able to make us smile and then remove our guts by an unexpected ending. Unfortunately, Roald doesn't succeed in any of this things. Most of stories are not funny enough and the endings are highly predictable.
I don't know if Roald is a great children storyteller but, according to my opinion, he is an awful adult storyteller. Therefore, if during your childhood you enjoyed Roald books don't spoil your memories by reading their adult stories. If you haven't enjoyed Roald as a child I regret to tell you that you wouldn't enjoy him as an adult. But there are some good news for you. If you, ignoring my advice, still dare to read "Ten Short Stories" you wouldn't lose a lot of time cause the book, at least, is short like the title said.





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